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编者按:上周全市中考揭开帷幕,近5万初中毕业生步入考场。大伙最关心的作文题也在考试结束后第一时间火热出炉,成为街头热议的焦点。作为全省唯一的命题作文,宁波卷给出了拍照、乘车时的小情境,从而引出“往后一小步反而更好”主题。
两个情境中,近看与远观,向前争与向后让,生活化中蕴含丰富的东方思辨性。那么,老外怎么解答这道题呢?本报特别邀请了一名摩洛哥小哥Abdelhak
Benkerroum,请他以考生的身份,结合自己的宁波故事,写一篇原汁原味的“国际范”中考作文。
往后一小步
by
Abdelhak
Benkerroum(阿道)
Life
is
a
long
journey.
We
are
not
responsible
for
its
length,
but
we
are
responsible
for
its
depth.
Some
of
us
chose
to
take
the
train
of
life
all
the
way
until
the
last
stop.
Some
others
prefer
to
get
off
the
train
in
an
earlier
stop,
find
their
comfort
zone,
and
settle
in.
I
got
off
that
train
five
years
ago
and
found
my
comfort
zone.
The
company
I
worked
for,
Expeditors
International
of
Washington,
promoted
me
to
a
regional
management
position
and
asked
me
if
I
was
interested
in
moving
to
settle
in
Dubai
and
work
at
their
Dubai
office.
I
quickly
said
yes.
A
few
weeks
later,
there
I
was,
sitting
at
their
Dubai
office
and
calling
Dubai
home.
A
very
high
salary,
an
intellectually
challenging
job,
a
luxurious
car,
a
magnificent
home,
plenty
of
entertainment,
amazing
friends
from
all
over
the
world.
The
right
place
to
make
a
lot
of
money
and
spend
a
lot
of
it.
The
right
place
to
have
a
fun
life.
I
was
27
years
old
and
life
was
already
smiling
to
me!
I
thought
to
myself
that
my
long
journey
has
come
to
an
end,
and
I’m
getting
off
that
train
and
settling
in
this
amazing
city
forever.
That
first
year
in
Dubai
went
by
so
fast
it
felt
like
I
only
slept
one
night
and
woke
up
to
find
myself
living
the
same
life.
I
had
so
much
fun,
but
I
didn""t
see
the
time
passing.
I
was
doing
the
same
things
every
day,
and
the
routine
became
boring.
Nothing
entertained
me
anymore.
More
sadly,
I
felt
like
my
life
had
no
purpose.
So
I
decided
to
spice-up
my
life
by
doing
new
things
and
adding
purpose
and
meaning
to
my
life.
I
decided
to
sign
up
for
kick-boxing
classes,
to
buy
myself
a
horse
and
start
riding,
and
to
start
learning
a
new
language.
This
last
decision
was
about
to
change
my
life.
I
started
taking
evening
classes
at
the
Confucius
Institute
at
the
University
of
Dubai,
jut
for
fun.
Because
Chinese
language
was
a
challenging
thing
to
learn,
and
because
I
thought
to
myself
that
by
finding
new
challenges
I
could
add
excitement
to
my
life.
After
going
through
4
levels
of
Chinese
classes,
my
Chinese
teacher
suggested
I
apply
for
the
Confucius
Scholarship.
I
was
not
sure
what
it
meant
at
that
time,
but
I
said
yes
anyways.
We
applied
and
a
few
weeks
later
I
received
an
saying:
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A
few
words
that
first
made
me
smile,
then
they
made
me
think.
There
I
had
a
choice:
Remain
in
my
beautiful
Dubai
and
enjoy
all
what
that
comfortable
life
had
to
offer,
or
jump
into
the
unknown
and
take
the
train
of
life
again
and
continue
my
life
journey.
I
had
to
make
the
decision
very
quickly
or
else
I
would
lose
a
(maybe)
good
opportunity.
I
decided
to
go
with
the
second
option
and
risk
everything.
I
presented
my
resignation
letter
to
my
direct
manager,
I
sold
all
my
belongings
in
Dubai
(including
my
horse),
and
after
spending
exactly
two
years
in
Dubai,
I
moved
over
to
China
to
discover
what
life
has
to
offer
to
me
again.
I
have
been
in
China
more
than
three
years
now.
I
sometimes
take
a
step
back
and
think
what
would
have
been
my
life
like
if
I
stayed
in
Dubai.
I
got
a
taste
of
that
three
weeks
ago
when
I
called
my
Moroccan
friend
in
Dubai
to
wish
him
a
happy
Ramadan.
It
was
the
first
time
I
talked
to
him
since
I
left
Dubai.
Generally,
when
I
meet
a
friend,
I’m
into
the
habit
of
asking
them
“What’s
new
in
your
life?”
rather
than
the
standard
“How
are
you?”
So
I
asked
him
what
was
new
in
his
life.
He
answered
that
he
was
still
working
at
the
same
company
in
Dubai,
but
at
a
higher
managerial
position.
He
was
living
in
a
bigger
house,
and
driving
a
better
car.
Nothing
much
has
changed
in
his
life
other
than
making
more
money
and
spending
even
more.
That’s
what
was
new
in
his
life!
He
asked
me
what
was
new
in
my
life
since
I
left
Dubai
and
moved
to
China.
I
told
him
that
it
has
been
more
than
three
years
since
I
moved
to
China.
I
lived
in
two
different
cities,
studied
Chinese
at
a
university,
traveled
to
more
than
30
cities,
opened
my
own
trading
company
in
Hong
Kong,
taught
undergraduate
students
at
a
university,
opened
my
own
training
company
in
Ningbo,
wrote
my
own
book,
and
now
working
on
my
e-learning
platform.
We
both
started
laughing
on
how
our
lives
were
similar
to
each
other
when
we
lived
in
Dubai,
and
how
they
contrasted
widely
today.
I
felt
some
remorse
in
his
life.
He
ended-up
saying
he
is
exploring
other
opportunities
to
move
back
to
Morocco
and
start
a
new
life.
I
ended-up
wishing
him
what
I
wish
to
all
my
friends
all
the
time
“May
you
live
every
day
of
your
life.
May
you
LIVE
every
day
of
your
life”
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